by Lori Woodward Simons on 12/5/2008 9:35:54 AM
A few weeks ago, I asked readers if they'd be interested in a post on how to write better blogs or articles. Well... as you might have guessed, I've been busy, but I haven't forgotten about it.
I'll begin by writing down a few things today and then continue to write on this topic as "stuff" comes to mind.
First Paragraph
This is the most important text in the article. It doesn't always need to 'say what you're going to say'. It can start with a story or a personal experience that will relate to the article's topic, but what this paragraph must have is a Hook. The first few lines need to interest the reader enough to continue through the entire article. If this text doesn't grab them, they'll abandon the article.
Make Paragraphs Short
Each paragraph should be 4 to 6 sentences long. Readers' eyes tire easily if they continually try to find their place in the text. By splitting up the text into easily digestible paragraphs, you'll keep the reader's attention.
Each Paragraph should have its own subject
The first line of a paragraph is an introduction to what the paragraph is about - then the rest of the sentences elaborate on that subject. If you move onto a new subject, start another paragraph. Also, if you move onto an important related subject, add a heading - like I've done for this post.
When each paragraph contains a separate thought, it's easy for editors to shorten the article article without changing the writer's views. Yes, editors often cut out up to 1/3rd of my text for my articles in Watercolor Magazine... I don't mind - shorter is stronger. Which brings me to my next tip.
Shorter is Stronger
Keep your posts short - around 500 words or less. Don't tell more than one story, unless the article is a series of stories about the same topic. Resist talking too much, and make every sentence state your intentions efficiently, by choosing the best descriptive words. Don't ramble; get to the point!
When I write my first draft, I type away as thoughts randomly come to my mind, and then I ruthlessly edit the heck out of it, sometimes deleting beautiful text because it doesn't add any new info or make the article more interesting.
My goal is to write what will be helpful to my audience - not to show them how important or clever I am. As I edit, I put myself in the reader's seat by pretending that someone else wrote the text. If anything seems less than interesting, helpful, or downright stupid - it gets cut.
Eliminate words such as:
really, very, I think, always, now... We already know that you are stating your thoughts, so words such as, very and really actually weaken your statement. On the same note, use one or two exclamation marks for each post - too many is like the boy who cried wolf - when every sentence shouts, the most important statements no longer stand out. Nobody really believes that everything the author states is that important.
Know Your Audience
Let me reiterate: the best writers do not write to impress their readers (although I admit that sentiment usually creeps into my thinking while writing). Articles are more about the audience than the writer. Folks read your blog so that they might take something useful from it. Be generous with your knowledge and expertise. You won't make money every time you write, that's for sure... oops I'm headed into another subject here... time to begin a new paragraph.
Making Money From Writing
Don't think of every single blog as a money-maker. It takes time to build a loyal readership - eventually when you have a large enough following, the ability to make money from a blog will emerge. Now, I'd love to write forever for free, but since layoffs are eminent with my husband's job, I will need to make serious income at some point. When the time is right, I plan to put out some inexpensive e-books at maybe $10 each. I don't want to gouge artists. It's hard enough to make a living in the arts... and as an artist myself, I sometimes feel like everyone's making money off of me - while artists are giving their life over to their craft. This paragraph is too long..... I slipped in an ad for my upcoming e-books; probably not the right venue for that, and my views are negative.Normally I would delete this text, but I'll leave it in so you can see how I might go down a rambling, writing, rabbit hole.
Final Thoughts
I'm at just about 800 words. If I begin a new subject at this point, readers will start skimming and perhaps peruse their bookmarks. After all, when you began reading this post, you weren't wanting to take a college course in blog-writing. There's a ton more stuff I could talk about - like grammar, punctuation, and boring things that artists don't really need to know -- that's why editors get the big bucks! (I just used one exclamation point).
I'll write another blog on the same subject in the future... If you'd like one... lemme know.
Sincerely,
Lori
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5 Responses to Writing Better Blogs
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Karen Evans
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Excellent advice I will apply, thanks a lot!
Charlie
(Note, exclamation marks follow thank yous, which I sincerely want to emphasise and make important. :-)
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It is helpful to hear about blog writing. I intend to do more blog writing as one of my goals for the coming year.
Enjoyed your post about the power outage. I had a very similar experience here in north east PA about a month ago. It was illuminating to the joys of simplicity and focusing on what's important. Perhaps a once a week moratorium on the use of modern technology would be beneficial.
Thanks,
Joann
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